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| Here you can see that I tried to find out whether I could replace the text with the correct spelling but unfortunately it did not work. |
The following mistakes include: proposal, where the 'o' has been missed out, Lack of capitalisation for 'here', interview which has been spelt 'intreview' , look, where one of the Os's has been missed out, lack of punctuation at the end of the big chunk of writing i.e. full stop, needs the lexis 'countdown to the' where the to has been missed out, instead of the top 50 films it should be top 50 romantic dramas and the tag line underneath fusion, the first letters should all be capitalised. However at this present moment I am unable to figure out how to edit the text so I will need to ask one of the media teachers to help me.



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